Writing
假如你是英语晚会的报幕员，请根据下列内容写一篇100词左右的开幕词，开头部分已给出，不计入字数。
1. 目的：提高英语学习的爱好和英语口语水平
2. 出席：校长、英语教师和高三全体学生
3. 参演：高一年级各班（每班2个节目）
4. 节目：唱歌、朗诵、讲故事和英语剧表演等。
留意：要包括所有的内容，但不能逐条翻译。
Good evening, everyone,
The English evening……
解析： 首先，这是一篇报幕词，因此在行文时要留意语言必须符合人物的身份，使用必要的报幕词。往往很多同学只把重点放在写作上而忽略了这一潜在的要求。
其次，写作过程中必须涵盖题目要求中所提示的信息点，缺一不可。简单的翻译不可取，需使用适当的连词成句，连句成篇。
下述为一篇集合学生习作中所有错误的“范文”。作文讲评时，先让学生自我讲评，找出文中的错误并改正。
Good evening, everyone,
The English evening is begin. The evening in order to improve our interesting in English study and our speaking English. There are our headmaster, English teachers and students of senior 3 take part in our English evening. In the evening, each class of senior 1 give our 2 programmes. Include sing a song, read, speak story, English film and so on.
错误分析：1. 英语的基本句子类型不清楚，主被动不分。The English evening is begin.
2. 句子成分不完整。“The evening in order to improve our interesting in English study and our speaking English.”缺少谓语。
3. there be 句型中的问题，1）be动词的选择，体现主谓一致的问题There are our headmaster……
2）定语的处理（分词作定语）
There are……take part in our English evening.
4. 时态问题
5. 代词格的问题。…each class of senior 1 give our 2 programmes.
6. 固定表达的问题，如spoken English，tell stories, English plays
7. include 的用法。
范文：
Good evening, everyone,
The English evening will so begin. In order to enhance our interest in English study and improve our spoken English, we have decided to organize the English evening. In the evening, each class of senior 1 will put on two programmes, including singing, reciting, telling stories, English plays and so on. All the students of senior 3 are to come to attend the evening. Besides, we are glad to have invited our headmaster , as well as all the English teachers to our evening. I am sure the English evening will not only be helpful to our English, but bring to us a nice evening. I wish all of you would have a good evening with our performances. Now performance begins. Thank you.
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