浙江省高中证书会考作文辅导

日期:2008-06-18  作者:浙江平湖中学 张强

      一、书面表达评价要点:
      1、审题要细致:体裁—主体人称和主体时态要正确;
      2、内容要全面,缺一不可;
      3、四大句式要套牢;
      1)系表结构: 主语 连系动词 表语。(主语的状态)
      2)主谓结构: 主语 及物动词 宾语
      主语 不及物动词 状语(主语的动作)
      3)存在的有: There be 主语 地点状语
      4)祈使句: 动词原形 ...... /Don’t 动词原形 ...... (命令、建议、要求、请求)
      4.连接要自然, 重视有效的意义连接。
      5、绝对不能一段到底、至少三段。
      6、一定要打草稿,保证卷面的干净!
      二、书信作文要点
      1、 书信:第一、二人称;现在时态为主;
      2、 分三段(P1、目的;P2、主体;P3联系方式和问候)
      写信地址
      写信时间
      Dear xxx,
      How are you? I’m XXX. I’m very glad to receive your letter.I’m writing to tell you something about …
      ….I was born…I graduated from X University. I’m very interested in… and I do well in ….I once won the first prize/took the first place in an English contest….
      By the way ,you are welcome to call me up or write to me. My telephone number is 88….. and I live at xxx Street, Hangzhou, Zhejiang.Pleasegive me some advice on how to do….I’m looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible./I’m waiting for your early reply
      With my best wishes,
      Yours,
      XXX
      三、日记作文要点
      1、日记:第一人称为主;过去时态为主;
      2、分三段(P1、活动事件背景;P2、过程介绍(按时间或空间顺序);P3、总结或体会)
      December28th,2003 Fine
      It is Sunday and sunny today.My friend Bob and I were walking along the street when we suddenly saw ….
      In this way we did a good deed/found a way out.
      Early this morning, my classmates and I gathered at the school gate and then set off for…XXX welcomed us warmly at the gate and showed us around the …Soon it was getting dark, so we had to say good-bye to XXX and went away home.
      In a word, we have benefited a lot from the visit.
      四、议论文作文要点
      1、议论文:以第一或第三人称为主,现在时态为主;
      2、2、分三段
      第一段:议论的背景
      第二段:不同观点的陈述
      第三段:个人观点的陈述或总结
      Recently we have had a discussion/debate/survey about…
      1)Our views are divided into two.
      2)sb。 have different views。
      3)It/Doing… has both ist advantages and disadvantages.
      Some of us/them think it is necessary/important/useful for us to do sth for the following reasons. First,….Second, …..Third, ……In all, we should.
      But/However,/ On the contrary, others believe that…
      In my opinion/Personally speaking
      On one hand,…..
      On the other hand,….
      常用词组:
      Doing can be helpful/help to improve …spoken English/our English listening and writing
      Doing sth. do harm/damage/good/bad to;
      It /Doing sth. be harmful /bad/good/ helpful for sth;
      it’s a waste of money/ time to do sth.;
      it’s convenient/easy/hard for sb. to do sth
      protect the environment/the earth/the world/wild life/;
      keep the balance of nature;
      fight against all kinds of pollution
      get/collect information about …on /over the Internet
      …can help to keep/get in touch with
      so .that…
      leave a good impression on
      be rich/poor in…
      sb. be interested in
      sb. would like to do sth.
      五、通知的写法
      第一段:通知的目的:In order to improve our ….,our school/class has decided to do…
      第二段:通知的内容:交替使用一般将来时的不同形式:we will/shall/are going to /we are to do。。。
      第三段:留意事项:使用祈使句
      Please bring your …with you.Don’t be late.